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The Valentine Cookie Fiasco

2/13/2018

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With the start of Write Club, at my school, there is no better time than the present to brush off my story short skills by entering  Susanna ​Leonard Hill's 3rd Annual Valentiny Writing Contest.

Details: Valentines story should be appropriate for children (cages 12 and under) maximum 214 words in which someone is hopeful! 

The Valentine Cookie Fiasco 
by Rena Traxel 
Words: 213

​Lily iced the sugar cookies, writing each guest’s name in bright red icing.  She hung streamers, loaded the stereo and laid out games. This year’s Valentine’s Day party would be the best one yet!
Spindle, an orange tabby, happily meowed at the arriving guests. 
The music boomed. Guests bobbed and twisted and sang along.
“Time for cookies,” Lily announced.
But when Lily went to the kitchen, she discovered a cookie had disappeared—Sela`s cookie.
Lily searched for clues, but found only crumbs and drool.  
“Did you get a cookie?” Lily asked Sela.
                “No. I can`t wait to dig in.” Sela helped hand out cookies.
                Lily counted and recounted the cookies. There were no extras.
Screams erupted from the corner of the living room.
What now? Lily ran over to her guests.
Spindle knocked around an object to the amusement of the crowd. Lily bent down. Between Spindle’s paws was a part of a cookie with an S on it--Sela’s cookie!
“I’m so sorry, Sela. My cat ate your cookie,” said Lily, holding up the cookie piece.  “But…” Lily bit her lip. “You can have my cookie.”
“That’s okay,” said Sela.
“I don’t mind sharing,” said Drew. He broke his heart-shaped cookie in two.
Sela blushed.
Lily smiled. “Happy Valentine's Day!”

9 Comments
Terri Forehand link
2/13/2018 03:07:46 pm

Excellent

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Gregory E. Bray link
2/13/2018 03:52:45 pm

My cat eats cookies too. =) Good luck!

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Lynn Davidson link
2/14/2018 04:41:37 am

I wish you well with this cute story.

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Jilanne Hoffmann
2/14/2018 11:38:17 am

Lucky it wasn't a dog. Otherwise, there'd be no cookies to share, LOL. Sweet story! Good luck!

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Nancy Riley link
2/14/2018 04:48:19 pm

Nice story. Good luck!

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Maria Marshall link
2/14/2018 10:04:51 pm

Those dastardly pets. More than one party has been ruined/altered by the antics of a pet. Love the ending Drew suggests. Good Luck.

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Lauri Meyers link
2/16/2018 05:03:24 am

Aww, cookie love and cats!

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Hilary Melton-Butcher link
2/16/2018 10:42:46 am

Hi Rena - oh how often does that happen ... but love the happy ending - so pleased for Cela and at least Lily's party wasn't a disaster ... and Drew was happy - cheers Hilary

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Susanna Leonard Hill link
2/20/2018 06:20:12 am

Ooh! What a naughty kitty! But what cat could resist a Valentine cookie toy? :) Glad it all worked out in the end! Thanks for an entertaining, nicely written entry, Rena!

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